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A future... by =JACAC:iconJACAC:

Categories Photography > Animals, Plants & Nature > Waterscapes

©2009 =JACAC
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~Stevie73 Jul 1, 2009, 9:41:05 AM
When looking at this picture, you kind of feel there is a story behind it. Why is the girl (it is a girl right?) standing there? What is she thinking about? Or is she just enjoying the water? Just go ahead and create your own story. Such thoughts create a nice 'after-effect' in a picture. The fact that the details of the girl are not visible adds to the mystery of who she really is. This composition will be attractive to a wide variety of people. The composition itself is good and balanced aswell. The girl situated on the bottom half, just a little bit of beach visible and emphasis on the sea, which creates an 'endless' feeling. As to detail: I like the little edge on the beach that lights up and creates a good passage to the sea. Overall I find this a very good picture with a story behind it. And that makes it worth looking at it even longer...
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~Pikity Jul 1, 2009, 8:38:55 AM
O SENHOR José não para de me surpreender nunca...
Parabéns pelo seu talento.
Acho que vai gostar as minhas novas fotos :P
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=JACAC Jul 1, 2009, 8:39:18 AM
:rose:s

--
And there is a smile of smiles
In which these two smiles meet
William Blake
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*m-lucia Jul 1, 2009, 8:48:08 AM
Adoro a imagem e as palavras que a completam - é linda a ideia de um futuro cheio de estrelas brilhantes!

:hug:

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" Great photography is about depth of feeling, not depth of field "

Peter Adams
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=JACAC Jul 1, 2009, 9:19:59 AM
o h ! Filipa - S e n h o r . José !!!???
o b r i g a d o . p e l o . s i m p á t i c o . e . c a r i n h o s o . c o m e n t á r i o
u m . :hug:zinho . Srª . D . Filipa

--
And there is a smile of smiles
In which these two smiles meet
William Blake
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=JACAC Jul 1, 2009, 9:45:46 AM
m a s . a . r e a l i d a d e . é . b e m . d i f e r e n t e
i m a g i n e m o s . p o r . m o m e n t o s . q u e . n ã o . e . o l h e m o s . a s . e s t r e l a s . b r i l h a n t e s
:hug:s

--
And there is a smile of smiles
In which these two smiles meet
William Blake
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~PabloPosse Jul 1, 2009, 10:23:14 AM
Great! I think it´s great how you remove the horizon and turn the background into an endless water surface; no references, an horizon too far, just like the future. But I also find this sort of halo around the head a bit disturbing...
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=JACAC Jul 1, 2009, 10:24:45 AM
t h a n k . y o u . m y . d e a r . f r i e n d . :hug:

--
And there is a smile of smiles
In which these two smiles meet
William Blake
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NIKON CORPORATION
NIKON D300
10/32000 second
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250 mm
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Jun 10, 2009, 6:33:36 PM

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